ravenclawsquill: (Ravenclaw)
ravenclawsquill ([personal profile] ravenclawsquill) wrote on October 19th, 2016 at 04:05 pm
This is a spectacular piece of writing; a masterful use of the tricky second person narrative.

I could feel Draco's fear in the pit of my stomach.

You want to be close to him, as close as you can get. You want to crawl inside of him, exist in the beat of his heart and the rush of his breath.

He comes, and you follow, because you always follow him, Salazar, fuck, anywhere, everywhere.

Just lovely. My heart hurts.

What a bittersweet finale!
 
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