This was BEAUTIFUL, grace, and I didn't even notice the 2nd person POV until I saw the comments. It worked especially well because I think we are all crazy for Harry in that way. This resonated for me:

He's the brightest fucking light you've ever seen.

I stopped and thought, he's the brightest fucking light any of us have ever seen, that's at least in part the reason why so many of us are obsessed with this bloody fandom! ♥

It's a gorgeous piece to end with and I love the way you didn't capitulate, but stayed true to the prompt and to Draco's reservations. I'm sure Harry understands. I loved the lyrical sex and the very sensual descriptions, so intense and emotional. Lovely stuff.