09 December 2019 @ 10:01 am
my writing process!  
[personal profile] pauraque recently talked about their writing process and invited others to share theirs! I find this so fascinating, so I figured I'd share my process as well!

My writing process goes like this:

1. Idea! Have a random plot bunny idea, claim a prompt for a fest, or be given a set of prompts to choose from.

2. Refine idea! If a set of prompts, decide on pairing and prompts to use.

3. Create a google doc for the fic, and slap a header at the top. I update the headers as I write with tags/WC/etc. and even though I often don't come up with a tite/summary until after the fic has been written, sometimes I am hit with inspiration early on and I put that in there too!

4. Outline! I do this for pretty much everything I write, even single-scene PWPs. For shorter stuff, it might just be a few lines, but generally I outline sort of stream-of-consciousness style with the overall content of the scene, sometimes with snippets of dialogue if they come to me.

As an example, here is what I outlined for the first chapter of my Advent!Fic this year:

1. Monday, December 1: Draco POV; IMAGE: bigben with snowman phonebooth

10 years since the war, haven't seen each other since. Veela inheritance, shame. Everybody found out, lots of serves him right, moved to France, worked there as an Auror. Thinking of coming home, reached out to creatures department, was told of pilot program, having issues recruiting creatures, Draco hesitant, but volunteers. Bound to be awkward, but maybe it's a chance to redeem himself? Ends with them meeting? Floos are disconnected at Manor, so needs to get to Ministry other way via phonebooth in London

Some of this changed once I actually started writing. France became Italy, because it's warmer (which is relevant to a sub-plot) and instead of Draco reaching out to the Ministry, the Ministry reaches out to him. This is actually a pretty brief version of these outlines though--oftentimes they get a lot more detailed, depending on how clearly I see the scene. Since the above fic was put together really quickly, but outline was a little more barebones.

5. Start writing! I usually write chronologically through scenes, with the occasional skipping of sections that are blocking me. Often with long!fic, there is a particular scene/conversation that I see very clearly that sort of inspired the entire fic, so sometimes I'll start with that scene and then go back and write from the beginning. I also generally research as I write/sporadically throughout the process. If, as I'm writing, there is something I was to confirm in canon, or that I need to brit-pick, or that requires a small amount of research to double check, I'll make a note, and then come back when I'm editing, or on a day when words aren't coming but I want to be productive. I often use XX as a placeholder for names I need to come back and figure out etc. I prefer writing in the late morning/early afternoon in more-or-less silence.

6. Edit! I generally like to completely finish with my draft before I start editing. If I take a long break from writing something, I'll usually read-through what I've written and edit as I go as a way to get back into the story, but usually I write something through to the end, then go through and do my initial round of editing.

7. Send to alpha/beta/brit-picker(s)! I very rarely will send something to be looked over until I've completely finished the first draft and done my initial edits. There are occasional exceptions, like with my Advent!Fic where I needed to start posting before I had finished writing, or if I really am stuck and need feedback, but usually I like to send along a finished product. I also generally prefer to have at least two people look at my writing, as I appreciate multiple perspectives on my fics. For shorter stuff, this is less important, but for my longer fic is it pretty much mandatory that at least two people look it over and provide feedback. I prefer alphas/betas who are more involved and not shy about offering concrit beyond simple SpaG fixes, mixed in, of course, with some squee.

8. Go though alpha/beta/brit-picker edits! Depending on how substantial these are, these can involve some additional back and forth with to confirm my changes make sense!

9. Once I've made all the edits I plan to make, do a final read-through of the fic. I definitely do make some line edits at this stage, but rarely anything substantial.

10. Review header. Update tags/tag order if necessary, come up with summary and title if I haven't already.

11. Submit/Upload to AO3. It's pretty rare that I am not uploading to AO3 before I plan to actually post. If it's not for a formal fest where I'm posting to an anon collection, I generally save in drafts less than a month before my planned posting date so that it is all ready to go when I need it.

12. If not for a fest, post on AO3 with a header on tumblr & DW!

13. Try not to obsess over stats.

14. Lather, rinse, repeat.

Aaaand, I think that's everything, LOL. If any of y'all are interesting in sharing your process, I'd definitely love to read them!
 
 
 
 
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pauraque[personal profile] pauraque on December 9th, 2019 11:04 pm (UTC)
Yay, I'm glad to see other people doing this!

I rarely ask more than one person to beta a fic, unless there's something specific I'm looking for like a brit-pick. I can think of a few reasons for that... I usually write short things, I'm often running up against deadlines so I'm already asking for betas at the last minute, and I find sending a fic to beta pretty nerve-wracking so I don't know if my heart could take doing it more than once per story. :) I also never have people look at things before they're in a finished state. If I'm stuck I'll ask someone to brainstorm with me, but I'd never show them unedited fic. I'm too self-conscious for that!
쉘리 Unmistakably Oatmeal: hp - books and glasses[personal profile] sdk on December 9th, 2019 11:42 pm (UTC)
I find sending a fic to beta pretty nerve-wracking so I don't know if my heart could take doing it more than once per story.

Oh gosh. SAME.
gracerene[personal profile] gracerene on December 10th, 2019 04:53 pm (UTC)
Funnily enough, I actually don't mind at all the idea of people looking at my work, but what I find really anxiety-inducing is the asking to beta itself! It always feels like such a massive imposition, that I'm filled with nerves trying to find a beta, but once I do, I'm all good with them looking at my fic!
쉘리 Unmistakably Oatmeal: hp - harry flies[personal profile] sdk on December 9th, 2019 11:41 pm (UTC)
I love reading about people's writing processes! I feel like I do a less-organized/messier version of this, LOL. I never ever thought about uploading to AO3 early and saving a draft there, which makes so much sense and I'm sort of kicking myself for not realizing I could do that.

gracerene[personal profile] gracerene on December 10th, 2019 04:42 pm (UTC)
Yes, same!! It's so fascinating! And drafting to AO3 is SUCH a life-saver! I find it takes away so much of those little stresses the day-of, because all I need to do is edit the posting date and hit submit!
[personal profile] magpie_fngrl on December 10th, 2019 11:24 am (UTC)
I love reading about other people's writing process! Mine is vastly different, but I also tend to have a scene or conversation in the back of my mind that comes later in a longfic.
gracerene[personal profile] gracerene on December 10th, 2019 04:40 pm (UTC)
I believe you're more of a pantser, yes?? I know you just posted your process and I'm going to head over in a sec to read, LOL. I do find it super fascinating how differently people work!
[personal profile] magpie_fngrl on December 10th, 2019 04:53 pm (UTC)
Me too -- there are as many processes as people, or so it seems :)
writcraft[personal profile] writcraft on December 10th, 2019 07:51 pm (UTC)
I loved reading about your writing process. I know part of it because we often chat about writing and I frequently Brit Pick (and explain in depth about our shit spirits in bars LMAO) but I loved seeing it all set out like this. You are super organised and outline much more than I do and our editing process is quite different but there are definitely similar elements, particularly working out the initial stages / the ideas process.
gracerene[personal profile] gracerene on December 10th, 2019 08:51 pm (UTC)
Haha, yes, I feel like you're pretty familiar with my process, given you're frequently part of it!
glittering_git[personal profile] glittering_git on January 14th, 2021 06:18 am (UTC)
This was so interesting! Thank you for sharing:) Like many others mention, it's so fascinating to learn about others' writing processes. For your outlining, esp for longer fics, do you look at the balance of your fic? Like if it's chaptered, do you have a general idea of how many words will be in each chapter? Do you try to make this relatively even or just go where the words take you?
gracerene[personal profile] gracerene on January 14th, 2021 06:03 pm (UTC)
Nope! I've seen a lot of emphasis the past few months in the discords in regards to the word counts of chapters which I don't personally subscribe to. I think the scene/story should be told in however many words it needs to be, and I don't worry if one scene is longer/shorter than the others. Generally, I do find that, when plotting, I naturally have scenes that are more or less the same length, though there are always a few that end up being either longer or shorter and I let that happen if it generally flows and makes sense for the plot. Of course, there might be instances where a beta (or myself, in edits) realises that the length needs to be adjusted to ensure everything flows well, but I've always focused more on scenes/arc/plot points as opposed to actual word count.
glittering_git[personal profile] glittering_git on January 16th, 2021 09:50 pm (UTC)
I think that makes a lot of sense, so thank you for sharing. I tend to track my word count of sections/chapters, just to see where I'm at, but I do believe you're so right in saying that the story or scene should be told in the words it needs to. (This is all lovely advice to hear as I'm gearing up to really get into my big bang!)